Sunday, October 3, 2010

diaspora-'shimla'



under my sun i always slept
beside the river, beside
                      its floods
                      shallow



'shimla'
the aspens yielded
to an awakening
and i have since
      been diving
      breathless
 
              

5 comments:

  1. The second picture is absolutely splendid. Excellent colors ! Wonder why you rendered it black and white in the first place. Ever thought of carrying over the comments this poem had yielded previously? Just kidding.

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  2. hahaaahahahahahaha.....only she has the rights to use them....and if she weren't who she is....to apkoo bhi ptaa hai ......hum ni maaante....

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  3. and about the picture... i have always preferred black and white ....appeals to me more....for no apparent reason i guess...or maybe u cld give me one....or she could cld give me ..plenty....

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  4. Beautiful photos.
    And reading that poem left me breathless too.

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  5. helloo aayushi ....its always heartwarming for me to see people interested in poetry.....reading writing whatever it may be....especially in our country....really a pleasant surprise to read your welcomed comment....i see you have a blog...will visit as soon as i get the time.....thanku for stopping by.....

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