Sunday, August 14, 2011

Fall

Hope has survived
wiping wires from outside
on my chest
It beats on the inside
like swollen feathers
of a crow who waits
under blinking lamps
for the last drops
to trickle to my feet..
The changing sounds
of the rain slipping over the piano
make faces,standing in the doorway
where i burnt candles
to the floor
last night,searching
for pieces of glass
you dragged outside
with your eyes....

3 comments:

  1. Amazing imagery. The last lines got me. Painful. To drag such a thing with fingers, so much more so with eyes. Dangerous. Sharp. The whites gone bloody with the task, like rain slipping over the piano! Wow. The way you put the words together make my tongue wag. Your mind is an intensely creative space Manik! I've gone to my dark place with this one.

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  2. Annie,
    Thank you for your kind words...They give me strength...i'm going through a tormenting time in my life right now...dark is all i know....but when i come here to my only sacred place and see that i have people praying(in some sense) with me...i feel relieved...i feel alive....

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  3. I am praying. I have known this darkness all my life. It comes and goes. It stalks. But I would not be me without it. At the moment I live in the shadow of it. I am truly sorry for your torment.

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