Saturday, February 11, 2012

Dusk

The sun,
its setting gloom
meet in my ashtray

as two empty boats
pass each other,
at sea

3 comments:

  1. empty boats at sea implies that they are at the will of the waves. How long have I been an empty boat? Far too long to have any sail left. Time to buy a motor.

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  2. Its only wen these boats cross each other, that hope is born, like the sun's gloom paves way for a brighter dawn

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  3. Annie,
    haha...i had a good laugh at that...there is sail left in you....as long as there is a sea that beckons for it....

    Neha,
    to throw a more optimistic cape over the scenario...yes...you are right....

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